C - this looks really good. The drawing has improved a lot, and the layout is well organized. Nice.
Last thing to consider: I wonder about the large amount of negative space between the 2 columns of song lyrics. I'm not sure what the yellowish shape is - or if it is anything? It reminds me of the spotlight shining down on the figure at lower right of comics page. Is that what it is? Not sure.
How can you make this area of the page layout help support the words/concept? Should you pull the columns of type together a bit, to overlap it? Should there be additional imagery in that space? Not sure - but it feels not quite done, or understandable to me.
Something to think about - maybe the last tweak it needs?
C - this looks really good. The drawing has improved a lot, and the layout is well organized. Nice.
ReplyDeleteLast thing to consider: I wonder about the large amount of negative space between the 2 columns of song lyrics. I'm not sure what the yellowish shape is - or if it is anything? It reminds me of the spotlight shining down on the figure at lower right of comics page. Is that what it is? Not sure.
How can you make this area of the page layout help support the words/concept? Should you pull the columns of type together a bit, to overlap it? Should there be additional imagery in that space? Not sure - but it feels not quite done, or understandable to me.
Something to think about - maybe the last tweak it needs?