Greg - the last issue I see concerns the baseline of the small headings (Activities, etc). They sit awkwardly in relation to each other and in relation to the color shapes behind them. I suggest you draw one curved baseline across the three panels and position all three headings on this baseline. Try it and I think you'll find that they will make more sense in the layout. Nice work.
yeah I had the same thought. Last semester I was told not to do that, so I stayed away from it. However I agree and think in this version it will improve the piece.
Greg - the last issue I see concerns the baseline of the small headings (Activities, etc). They sit awkwardly in relation to each other and in relation to the color shapes behind them. I suggest you draw one curved baseline across the three panels and position all three headings on this baseline. Try it and I think you'll find that they will make more sense in the layout. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteyeah I had the same thought. Last semester I was told not to do that, so I stayed away from it. However I agree and think in this version it will improve the piece.
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